Wow. Love this, Ada. Didn’t see that coming with the black garbage bags. This chapter is packed with suspense and tension. Will they spot the girl? Will her father draw it out of her that she saw the body bags? Love the innocent questioning about fences and things falling off trucks. And yes, love the bricks touch too!
Nice! So very Jersey!! Especially the bricks.
Thanks Susan. Glad the brick details rang true.
Wow. Love this, Ada. Didn’t see that coming with the black garbage bags. This chapter is packed with suspense and tension. Will they spot the girl? Will her father draw it out of her that she saw the body bags? Love the innocent questioning about fences and things falling off trucks. And yes, love the bricks touch too!